Found a few inconsistencies: Despite me having had a hook-up Date with this guy on Findr before the Meet-up with Friends to one of their birthdays, the MC answers, that he's a virgin in the Bottle-Game as "truth", even though he definitely isn't anymore at the time!
Another logical inconsistency is the asking for names when they're (at least the Family Names are) clearly depicted on the Velcro-strips on the soldier's uniforms...
Also: putting the ring on that was taken out of the bird droppings without cleaning it? - EEEEEEEWWWW!
If you can fix these little logical mistakes, I'd love it - but they break immersion for me, since I see them and the Characters in the game do not ... and my brain doesn't like to dumb down ;-) - even when horny.
It can still be polite, or routine, to ask for someone's name, even if on a badge. It's not unheard of for people to have the wrong name badge or patch, although obviously the expectation for accuracy is different for military name badges over civilian name badges (where sometimes people swap, for fun, or just wear whichever one is available, if they're not allowed to take them home, or choose not to), or just to ask to call people out in a good or bad way.
You might want a first name, too.
It's not socially inconsistent, anyway.
You do seem to be conflating, to an extent, logical inconsistencies with social or personal preference inconsistencies. Something can be logical but socially inappropriate, or illogical yet something some/all people do.
Well, you still only explained the naming part, which I can accept - but the other mentioned inconsistencies still stand and are illogical and disturb immersion, i.m.h.o.
Despite me having had sex with the Findr-Date, the MC states he's a virgin when choosing "truth" in the bottle game - and not to speak of the Farm-Boy putting a bird-poop-dirtied ring on his finger...I thought people knew better than to believe the BS about "training one's immune system" with bacteria delusions by now (which this would propagate if it was the reasoning to not clean it first)...often correlating with toxic masculinity convictions, too.
When I was in the Military here in my country, I came home in Uniform and the MC also states that to his bestie in the messages on his phone - that she's looking forward to seeing him in it!
So, thanks for helping me find a few more inconsistencies in your argument - I hope this can help make things a little better - because that's why I'm posting this criticism - not to shit on a Game, that has really great potential otherwise.
But not realizing these details makes it feel as if it's just made for superficial minds who just want to bust a quick nut and don't care about immersion into the Story...if that's the goal of the entire project, then you might as well consider it achieved I guess.
And just ignore my attempts to make it good for the neuro-diverse community, who loves to match up the Details - even in an Erotic VN!
This game has an amazing storyline, with very good characters and very handsome. This game is not just a game but like a top movie. I hope the developer of this game can finish it until this game has more than 100 chapters😆 and can also be released in full soon. I'm ready to buy the full version🔥
It does make one wonder what kind of indie/solo content will be produced when computers and software become even more powerful and lower cost per performance ratio.
To the point where one person could make a film, using AI software to help with the voices and animations, and just provide the script and general directions. Well, even the script can have AI LLM assistance. Definitely, it will cause headaches for the big studios when it gets cheaper and cheaper for individuals or small groups to produce films of similar visual and audio quality to current blockbusters...
Throw in non-woke stories with interesting characters and locations, and it would cripple the modern, big, SJW studios. 😅
i have problems unziping the win-version. "resources.assets.resS" can't be unziped, if i try again its stuck again. if i skip the data i get blackscreen with sound, only thing i see after clicking play is when he takes out his phone to check "finder"
In the truth or dare question, If I chose truth they ask MC if he is still a virgin. If I choose to say the truth the answer is still virgin even if the Andre´s scene played before. The rest of the game is perfect, No bugs found. Please continue with this game.
I feel like the update was too short considering the wait it was,But it's a chapter to conclude the presentation of the main characters, I really liked Caio, good job(I remembered that all chapters are the same length, I discovered the game through chapter 4 so it seemed long)
7-zip is a reliable, free program on Windows for common types of compressed file (.zip, .rar, .7z, .iso). It also works faster to extract compressed archives that contain lots of smaller files, even on faster computers, than the Windows built in extraction, and just has more options in general.
I have just started the game and notice that it is far from finished. I have already become very curious, especially with the short part in court (what happened there!?) I play the game in English and hear an accent which I find very cute, it gives an extra layer to the story.
can you tell us how exactly you did that because I tried to do it and its nothing working flawlessly and I get stuck the first minute of every chapter, if theres a way you can reply this or dm me please let me know
I've tried running the game (v. 0.5.03) using Whisky (v. 2.3.2) on latest Macbook Pro (OS 14.2.1), simulating Windows 10. When trying to start a new game, the letters in the menu for choosing a chapter are not displayed and the blue bars remain empty. Furthermore, I can't take any action in the car right after the MC has checked the time on his phone in chapter 1 and the game won't proceed. The other chapters show similar behavior. I've tried Whisky with similar games and it worked without any issues.
O jogo está ótimo esperando atualização quero ver sexo entre pai e filho sexo entre o professor quero ver muito a história desenvolver perfeitamente esse jogo é muito bom merece estou curtindo muito
Ah yeah unfortunately it only works with silicon and I doubt they'll create one for intel based Macs. Your best bet would be to install Windows via Bootcamp.
That's what I had commented on his discord a few days ago, about having the option to choose but I think it's too late to add that in this update, maybe in the next one
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The bus scene was really hot, kinda hoped for more tho. The new chapter is pretty solid. Awesome work for the developer!
Found a few inconsistencies:
Despite me having had a hook-up Date with this guy on Findr before the Meet-up with Friends to one of their birthdays, the MC answers, that he's a virgin in the Bottle-Game as "truth", even though he definitely isn't anymore at the time!
Another logical inconsistency is the asking for names when they're (at least the Family Names are) clearly depicted on the Velcro-strips on the soldier's uniforms...
Also: putting the ring on that was taken out of the bird droppings without cleaning it? - EEEEEEEWWWW!
If you can fix these little logical mistakes, I'd love it - but they break immersion for me, since I see them and the Characters in the game do not ... and my brain doesn't like to dumb down ;-) - even when horny.
It can still be polite, or routine, to ask for someone's name, even if on a badge. It's not unheard of for people to have the wrong name badge or patch, although obviously the expectation for accuracy is different for military name badges over civilian name badges (where sometimes people swap, for fun, or just wear whichever one is available, if they're not allowed to take them home, or choose not to), or just to ask to call people out in a good or bad way.
You might want a first name, too.
It's not socially inconsistent, anyway.
You do seem to be conflating, to an extent, logical inconsistencies with social or personal preference inconsistencies. Something can be logical but socially inappropriate, or illogical yet something some/all people do.
Well, you still only explained the naming part, which I can accept - but the other mentioned inconsistencies still stand and are illogical and disturb immersion, i.m.h.o.
Despite me having had sex with the Findr-Date, the MC states he's a virgin when choosing "truth" in the bottle game - and not to speak of the Farm-Boy putting a bird-poop-dirtied ring on his finger...I thought people knew better than to believe the BS about "training one's immune system" with bacteria delusions by now (which this would propagate if it was the reasoning to not clean it first)...often correlating with toxic masculinity convictions, too.
When I was in the Military here in my country, I came home in Uniform and the MC also states that to his bestie in the messages on his phone - that she's looking forward to seeing him in it!
So, thanks for helping me find a few more inconsistencies in your argument - I hope this can help make things a little better - because that's why I'm posting this criticism - not to shit on a Game, that has really great potential otherwise.
But not realizing these details makes it feel as if it's just made for superficial minds who just want to bust a quick nut and don't care about immersion into the Story...if that's the goal of the entire project, then you might as well consider it achieved I guess.
And just ignore my attempts to make it good for the neuro-diverse community, who loves to match up the Details - even in an Erotic VN!
You're welcome
This game has an amazing storyline, with very good characters and very handsome. This game is not just a game but like a top movie. I hope the developer of this game can finish it until this game has more than 100 chapters😆 and can also be released in full soon. I'm ready to buy the full version🔥
It does make one wonder what kind of indie/solo content will be produced when computers and software become even more powerful and lower cost per performance ratio.
To the point where one person could make a film, using AI software to help with the voices and animations, and just provide the script and general directions. Well, even the script can have AI LLM assistance. Definitely, it will cause headaches for the big studios when it gets cheaper and cheaper for individuals or small groups to produce films of similar visual and audio quality to current blockbusters...
Throw in non-woke stories with interesting characters and locations, and it would cripple the modern, big, SJW studios. 😅
i have problems unziping the win-version. "resources.assets.resS" can't be unziped, if i try again its stuck again. if i skip the data i get blackscreen with sound, only thing i see after clicking play is when he takes out his phone to check "finder"
In the truth or dare question, If I chose truth they ask MC if he is still a virgin. If I choose to say the truth the answer is still virgin even if the Andre´s scene played before. The rest of the game is perfect, No bugs found. Please continue with this game.
I'm stuck in this scene, how can i fix this. Android user
我也是。你找到解决办法了吗？
THIS GAME REALLY AMAZING LIKE OMG I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!
The update was worth the wait but pretty short tho,,,, expected something like chapter 4. Good work
I feel like the update was too short considering the wait it was,But it's a chapter to conclude the presentation of the main characters, I really liked Caio, good job(I remembered that all chapters are the same length, I discovered the game through chapter 4 so it seemed long)
WOW I was dying for the new chapter, hope everything alright, can't wait for the next *___________________*
i got the extraction error message also
I bought the game but it extraction gives me error
same i think you need winrar
7-zip is a reliable, free program on Windows for common types of compressed file (.zip, .rar, .7z, .iso).
It also works faster to extract compressed archives that contain lots of smaller files, even on faster computers, than the Windows built in extraction, and just has more options in general.
Deixa eu perguntar...sera que teremos alguma interação com o pai? Kk
sei que é um fetich de muitos aqui
Vocês são maluquinho da cabeça kk
I have just started the game and notice that it is far from finished. I have already become very curious, especially with the short part in court (what happened there!?) I play the game in English and hear an accent which I find very cute, it gives an extra layer to the story.
I take it no hope you'll make a MacOS version?
Use Whiskey. You don't have to add anything on, just open a new bottle and click run. Works flawlessly for me on a MacBook Pro.
can you tell us how exactly you did that because I tried to do it and its nothing working flawlessly and I get stuck the first minute of every chapter, if theres a way you can reply this or dm me please let me know
Hello, sorry for the late reply. You need to go into the Winetricks menu for the bottle you created, then install "corefonts" from the Fonts menu.
I've tried running the game (v. 0.5.03) using Whisky (v. 2.3.2) on latest Macbook Pro (OS 14.2.1), simulating Windows 10. When trying to start a new game, the letters in the menu for choosing a chapter are not displayed and the blue bars remain empty. Furthermore, I can't take any action in the car right after the MC has checked the time on his phone in chapter 1 and the game won't proceed. The other chapters show similar behavior. I've tried Whisky with similar games and it worked without any issues.
same
Hello, sorry for the late reply. You need to go into the Winetricks menu for the bottle you created, then install "corefonts" from the Fonts menu.
That worked. Thank you for replying at all and making my day! :-)
No problem! I hope you enjoy it as much as I have!
O jogo está ótimo esperando atualização quero ver sexo entre pai e filho sexo entre o professor quero ver muito a história desenvolver perfeitamente esse jogo é muito bom merece estou curtindo muito
a gnt precisa disso vei, sexo com o pai e com o professor vai ser fd
Any hope for a MacOS version?
Use Whiskey. You don't have to add anything on, just open a new bottle and click run. Works flawlessly for me on a MacBook Pro.
Thanks for that suggestion. Whisky won't run. I have latest Mac OS 14.6.1, but my MBP is older. I bet Whisky only runs on apple silicon.
Ah yeah unfortunately it only works with silicon and I doubt they'll create one for intel based Macs. Your best bet would be to install Windows via Bootcamp.
Any chance you will create a version that works with MacOS? I wouldn't mind testing for you if you're interested.
FYI for all those wondering:
Use Whiskey. You don't have to add anything on, just open a new bottle and click run. Works flawlessly for me on a MacBook Pro.
can we choose to top or bottom ? Or is the character locked into a position ?
That's what I had commented on his discord a few days ago, about having the option to choose but I think it's too late to add that in this update, maybe in the next one
When is the next chapter coming?
jogo incrível, a quantidade de referencias é perfeito
When is the next update coming out? Just wondering
Is there no way to manually save?
Press Space! took me a while to find out.
Oh, pfft... probably the last key I would have thought to try. 😅
your game is awesome!! loved it, but pls do more guys or all of them with thick hairy pubes and hairy armpits
could you make a Mac version for the game, please?
How to save in android
when is the next update not on patreon
Mac version please! 🙌🏼♥️🥵
selo de qualidade brasileira <3
Definitely continue this game please. The scenes are phenomenal and the writing is nice. Keep up the amazing work
Curious on how many chapters you're planning to make? Or would it go on forever?
Hey enjoyed this game a lot, good to see a brazilian gay vn with such stupenduous quality
I'm kinda curious about a specific route, will the blue eyed sargent be available?
I love your game, its well done and the love you have for your project is way too obvious. I hope it goes well, and thank you for your work
MEU DEUS MANO!! EU NEM NOTEI QUE ESSE GAME ERA BR, LITERALMENTE PAUSEI O JOGO NA HORA PRA TE DAR OS PARABÉNS.
MELHOR JOGO DAQUI. CONTINUA COM ESSE TRABALHO INCRÍVEL MEU.
Eu amei isso também! Representando DEMAIS!!
this game looks drop dead gorg
Please don't lose interest in this amazing game. I will try to support as soon as I can.